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1月31日 Roar on the Plains...(short fiction)Extract from…’Races of Volana and other regions’ by The Grand Scholar Nithpantiel
“Anfautor centaurs are extremely infamous. They once lived in
Volana many years ago, but were shunned by the other centaurs because of their
Violent ways. They were sent to Jathara to die, but instead, flourished and made
The south-western part of the Southern Jathara plains their home. They live
Between two rivers that run through their area of the plains. They feast on
birds, fish, and alligator/crocodile. Their greatest foe is the Land, or
"Desert" dragon, but are not disturbed by them often. They are untrusting of
Everyone, especially from Volana. Angautor have tanned skin with dark brown
Hair, worn either long or shaven. They tend to wear a feather on each side of
Their head in their hair. Their lower bodies are thick and muscled (like Arabian
Horses) and both upper and lower body are adorned with tribal tattoos. Warriors
wear tribal tattoos upon their face and have ceremonial scars in varied places
of their torso. The tattoos on their lower body are not done by ink, but are
designed with pieces of hot iron. They are the fastest of all the centaur and
considered the most hostile to anyone whom they have firm belief to distrust.”
Theradir looked out from the rocky mound onto the plains below. He grimaced and grasped the large curved blade in his left hand. This was a good day for a meeting of the elders, the sky was blood red as the fortunes had foretold, and it would mean war would soon come to his tribe once more. He turned, his hooves digging at the sandy soil. He felt adrenaline pump through his muscular form, if the council agreed then they would deal with these interlopers in time honoured fashion. He walked down the rise back to the gathering centaurs below him, all of them awaiting his word.
Theradir was a fine specimen of the Anfautor race, his toned body was hardened from the many battles he had fought, burnt and scarred by the most vicious of foes. He was however, still tanned and quite handsome in appearance, his face was that of a middle aged man, grizzled and yet ruggedly so. Along the left side of his torso he carried his birth tattoo; all centaurs carried one, a sign of their passage into adulthood. Theradir’s took the shape of a winding pattern of swirls and patterns, matching the nature of his character. It symbolised his aggressive nature, and his courage to fight. The elder that had created it for him and seen fit to make him chieftain of his tribe once it had been done, a great honour that Theradir defended with great pride. The deep red had never faded from his tanned body, a constant reminder to all of who he was. He stopped, amidst his clansmen and signalled that the elders could be called to the mount.
Braggah, his closest companion moved towards him and nodded. “Theradir, it seems as if today will be the day.” He looked over Theradir’s shoulder out towards the blood red sun, rising from the horizon.
Theradir laid a hand on the shoulder of his friend. “It will be done soon, all we need is the word of the elders and we can bring the battle to the beast itself.” He gritted his teeth at the thought of the dragon that had had the audacity to attack them at their village.
Braggah snarled “We should not have to wait for their permission brother; we should be avenging your fallen kins deaths and bringing the beast to its knees” He gripped his sword tighter, twisting it in his hands.
“Be patient brother, the council is needed to instruct us on such matters, and we cannot go without their word.” He patted him on the shoulder once more and moved down the mound following the rest of his kin. “Do not let anger cloud your judgement, we all want revenge, but it needs to be blessed by them all.”
Braggah looked back at his brother, walking towards the meeting in the brush below. He turned and looked to the blood red sun; this was going to be a day to remember. A part of him wanted to go now, take his kin with him and hunt it down. But, he knew his brother was right, if he did not have the elders blessing, their journey would fail. He kicked the ground with his hooves and turned quickly to catch up with his brother. Braggah himself was thinner and less toned than Theradir; he had his tattoo on his arms, a symbol of his determination, and yet his brash nature. He still, however held it a badge of honour and saw this brashness as something to be rewarded.
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The meeting of the council members was a site to behold. Every high ranking member of the tribe was present, all surrounding the raised platform of stone in the centre. Atop it stood the High Elder, Garrash garbed in a cloak of light brown material, his chest adorned with small pendants of wood and bone. He demanded much respect from all around him; he was a grand warrior of an age long before many here now. There were stories that he had killed a desert dragon on his own, when all of his fellows had been killed. The skull of the dragon rested in the centre of their village, and few doubted his story. The crowd of gathered tribal members hushed as he spoke.
“The blood sun raises on a victory for our tribe my brothers. The dragon that ravaged our lands only a day ago will be chased from his hole and brought to the wrath of our swords, our spears, and our bows!” His voice boomed out over the crowd, and many cheers and growls of content echoed back at him.
Theradir looked round at his kin, and spotted Braggah across from him, his sword raised in anger, a look of hatred on his face. This was indeed a moment that all here would remember, none had seen a fight like this against such a creature in many years. The dragons themselves chose to stay clear of them, and they showed the same courtesy. If something had sent one to attack them with such ferocity then there was something deeper to all of this. He turned and listened back to Garrash speak once more.
“We will pick the finest, the bravest of our warriors and take the fight to the beast; all that is needed now is ten willing and able kinsmen to bring their wrath upon the beast.” He surveyed the crowd of roaring kinsmen; all seemed willing and were most certainly able to fight the dragon.
Theradir stepped forwards first, drawing his two curved blades and bowing low on his front legs, accepting the challenge. Three more to his left stepped forwards and knelt before their High Elder. He risked a look up and saw that Braggah and two others had done the same, bending low and raising their swords. He cast a glance to his left and saw the final three needed bend low, raising their swords too, as one. He had never met these centaurs, and something about them made him uneasy. Still, if Garrash approved he was not going to complain.
The crowd had dispersed as the ten clansmen met with Garrash and prepared for their journey. They all wore grim looks of determination on their faces, and gripped their weapons tightly. The cave, it appeared was no more than a days ride away, nothing to them. Garrash blessed them and then took Theradir aside for a moment, looking back the nine others all making their way across the expanse of grassland, slowly lagging to wait for him.
The High Elder laid a hand on Theradir’s chest and whispered in his ear. “Take good care warrior, he cannot afford to lose one as important as you.” He tapped him on the shoulder and turned, walking back to the stone alter.
Theradir grimaced; he did not like this special treatment. Despite his status he preferred the acknowledgement of a lowly member of the clan, after all in his mind, with status came the lack of thought and clarity that came into combat situations. At least being treated as anyone else, he would never feel above his fellow kin, and do something to compromise their lives. He chased to catch up with Braggah and the rest, slowing as he neared his brother and started to pace himself. A full day’s ride was not something to be taken lightly, especially if the sun got as hot as it did yesterday. He was, however fully capable of riding at speed in the heat, but he did not know his new companions, and his deep distrust was spreading into his own kin it seemed.
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They rode until the night descended once more, the sun had not been as hot as they had thought, and they had made good progress across the plains to the fringes of where the dragon had been last seen by their scouts. They rested as the moon rose into the night sky. The centaurs milled around, some standing guard, while others took what rest they could get. Theradir and Braggah however, stood together, looking down into a deep canyon further ahead of them, and pondered on the next day, and what was going to be the fight of their lives.
“These dragons cannot be tough” Braggah bragged. “If old Garrash could kill one in single combat, then it should be no match for ten strong, young warriors”. He turned and smirked at his brother.
Theradir smiled back. “It will be a hard fight Braggah. I’ve seen what these creatures can do.” He looked down at the bright burn on his stomach. “They will not go easily, or quietly.” He ran a tanned hand over the burn and remembered the moment the dragon had attacked; it had killed several of their strongest warriors before they had brought it down, spears thudding into the beast. This new fight would not be so easy.
Braggah grunted. “We shall see brother”- he paused for a second – “what is our plan?” He turned and looked at the centaurs below him, talking and looking around at the plains.
“If we can, we catch the beast sleeping brother. But, I have never met one in its lair before.” Theradir felt a slight unease flicker in his mind as he said that. It was true that they had beaten desert dragons before, but never since Garrash had anyone beaten one at its lair.
Braggah nodded. He knew that his brother was contemplating the coming battle, and how it could turn out. They could, in all theory find the beast and kill it while it slept, but in the worse possible circumstances they could be trapped inside the creatures cave, which for centaurs was a nightmare to fight in. They needed the range to effectively fight an enemy. He went to speak but Theradir put up a hand to silence him.
“No more talk brother” He said, and ushered for him to go rejoin the others. “I must decide the best course of action for the new day” He turned and looked down into the canyon, one of those caves held the beast, all he needed to do was find it.
Braggah turned and walked back to his kinsmen. The oldest of their group, and aging archer named Urethral stepped in front of him and blocked his path. Braggah frowned.
“What is it Urethral?” He said, stopping and closing a hand on his sword by his side.
Urethral was an aging centaur of noble decent. His skin, like others was tanned and covered in tattoos that gleamed back in the moonlight. His hair was deep silver, with flecks of black still in his long hair. His body, the lower of course, was black as night, and in reverse had the same streaks of grey running over his flanks. It was as muscular as most, but seemed more hidden than others. The old centaur put it down to his use of the bow rather than the sword, ‘less running around like a scared gnome’ he always said. He frowned and looked at Braggah with piercing blue eyes.
“Your brother, he does not know what he is doing.” He moved closer as to shroud their conversation. “We should go, and deal with this beast now.” He looked over Braggah’s shoulder at Theradir looking out into the canyon. “When he sleeps, there are those of us who will go with you on your command and kill this beast in the way we should have done a day ago.” He looked back at Braggah for approval.
Braggah frowned again, and felt ever conscious of his brother behind him. He thought for a second before answering. “It will be done, make sure we leave when all is quiet and we will deal with this beast in good time. It does me no pleasure to betray my brother, but vengeance is called for.”
Urethral grunted in approval and turned back to the centaurs behind him, sending a whisper of decent through them. Braggah turned and looked to his brother once more; he only hoped he would forgive him in time for taking this glorious kill.
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Theradir stirred uneasily, a hand shaking him awake. He opened his eyes and looked up at Harravesh, on of his kin, standing over him, a look of dismay on his face. He stood uneasily, his rear legs aching with pain from sleeping so awkwardly on the floor of the plains, and looked to Harravesh.
“What is it Harravesh?” He looked around for a second, and saw that there were only three others left, and Braggah and Urethral were no where to be seen. “Where have they gone?” He roared in a low thundering voice.
Harravesh frowned and shifted uneasily. “I believe they left early in the morning my lord,” (To Harravesh, the youngest of their companions, this honour was one he could not forgo.) “Taken with them many of our kin to find the dragon as it slumbers.”
Theradir cursed and slammed the ground with his hooves, bending down to pick up his sword from the sandy floor. “They will be killed, the fools!” he shouted to himself. “They cannot hope to bring it down with so few.” He turned too looked back at Harravesh. “Are the tracks fresh?”
Harravesh turned and pointed to several sets of hoof marks in the sand. “They went down into the canyon; I followed them and returned to you as soon as I was certain.” He turned and signalled for the remaining few centaurs to gather around.
Theradir laid a hand down on Harravesh’s shoulder. “You have done well Harravesh” – he looked round at the others, grim looks of disgust on their faces. - “now I think we should catch up with our brothers and hope it is not too late.”
With haste, they gathered their weapons and charged off after the tracks of their brethren. As they ran, galloping hard on the plains, Theradir wondered what had swayed Braggah in particular to go with Urethral and the others. He was his brother, and brash as he may be, this seemed almost beyond a betrayal of his trust. He felt a shame wash over him, what if his brother was killed? What if the others were killed? He would be held responsible no matter what Harravesh and the others may say to defend him. At the moment, he felt like he had failed them. He looked round at his fellows, the sweat dripping from them as they charged along the long trail of prints ahead of them. They would need to be quick before it was too late.
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Braggah looked around nervously, drawing his spear and watching as the others notched arrows into their bows, holding them low. They moved slowly, their hooves grinding on the stone of the canyon floor. It had not taken them long to get down here, and now in the deathly quiet of the canyon, as the sun started to rise above them, they awaited the sign of the dragon. They carried on, looking all around at the holes and caverns dug into the sides of the canyon. One of these held the creature, slumbering or not. The network of passages and tunnels must be vast within this place, there had been tales that once it had been a haven for the Minotaur of this region, but they had been driven out by the dragons, that now lived here, taking refuge from the world outside.
Urethral turned and looked up at the cave to his right, he swore he saw something move and stopped dead, his bow raised and taunt in one swift motion. The flash of gold in the cave was too much of a coincidence, and he signalled for the others to stop too. They all turned and pointed their bows at the entrance, pulling back on the strings. The ground rumbled, shaking as the footsteps of something gigantic padded through the darkness before them. They all moved backwards, trying to avoid the creature if it advanced on them too quickly.
Urethral snarled and let a shot from his bow fly into the darkness, loading another quickly. The arrow disappeared into the darkness, thudding something, only to be matched by an all might roar that shook the canyon around them, reverberating off of the rocks around them. The dragon rushed from the cave, its gigantic head reaching towards them, mouth open wide. They hardly had time to dodge, galloping to the side as the monsters head slammed into the canyon wall behind them, crushing one of their kin in an instant, and his body broken in the beast’s jaws. Urethral shouted for them to split up, and they two smaller groups raced in opposite directions, trying to distract the beast.
The dragon roared and sent a jet of flame towards Braggah’s group, engulfing one of their kin in flames as he was burnt to a cinder. Braggah twisted on the spot, galloping to face the dragon and threw his spear hard towards the beasts head. It was too quick, snapping its gigantic jaws and splintering the spear as it closed on it. It roared again and rose into the air, trailing its tail along the canyon floor as it glared down at the insignificant centaurs below it. It opened its jaws once more and was about to let a jet of flames shoot towards Braggah and the others, when it was distracted by something behind it. Braggah looked past it and saw Urethral and the others letting arrows loose into its back, some sticking while others merely bounced off of its armoured carapace. The dragon turned and batted one of the centaurs aside with a swipe its claws, sending the broken body crashing to the ground in a heap.
Braggah signalled for the others with him to fire once more at the beast, aiming for its head the arrows flew forwards, and yet seemed to do little against it save aggravate the beast more. It sent jets of flame dancing around them, as they regrouped and ran as fast as they could away from the creature. Urethral turned and looked to Braggah, keeping an eye on the dragon behind them, swirling through the air high above them and letting the balls of fire slam into the ground, sending rock and dirt flying around them. Braggah looked back and grimaced, they needed help, quick.
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Theradir sped up as he heard the roar echo around the canyon walls. He knew they were close, but for all he knew they could already be dead. The others pressed on behind him, drawing their bows from their backs and notching arrows as the galloped, thundering down the winding paths to the canyon floor. In minutes, they had hit the bottom, and looked at the scene of destruction that lay before them. The broken bodies of two of their kin lay before them in a mass of blackened rock and torn stone. They looked down quickly and saw the others fleeing from the gigantic dragon, which was hovering and swirling behind them. With a nod the centaurs all charged after them, nervous looks of grim determination on their faces. Hopefully, they would still be able to bring it down.
Theradir looked to Harravesh and pointed at the horn around his neck. The young centaur knew what to do, and took it too his lips, blowing long and hard. The growl of the ancient horn echoed down the valley, signalling the charge. Ahead of them the dragon stopped and turned, twisting in the air above them, its long body coiling, and pointed to them, it’s eyed fixed on these new intruders to its lair. Theradir nodded once more and the centaurs let a volley of arrow fly towards it, they again thudded harmlessly into its scaly skin and those that did stick seemed to do little damage. He grimaced and pulled his swords, dropping his bow as he ran and twisted them in his grip.
Behind the dragon now, Braggah and Urethral and the other centaurs, wheeled round and looked as the dragon turned its attention back to the others. They drew their blades and raced back, avoiding the smouldering craters. Braggah knew they had been rash, too rash in their decision to attack without the support of the entire herd and they had paid the price. Now, they just needed to redeem themselves, especially in his brother’s eyes.
The dragon zoomed low, stretching to its full length and careering head first into Theradir and his group, they galloped to the side trying to avoid the gnashing jaws. Most did, but one of their numbers was grabbed by the large clawed feet of the dragon and almost ripped in two, being sent flying to the ground. Theradir slashed at it as it flew by, feeling his swords slice through the scales, he drew blood, but he knew this was too little too hurt it too any degree. He rushed forwards, ducking as the tail of the dragon whipped inches from his head and joined with the rest of the herd, slowing and turning as Braggah and Urethral ran towards them. He shot a glare at his brother before grunting and spinning round with to face the dragon, all of them ready to accept what happened next.
Those that still had their bows notched arrows once more and pulled back the bow strings awaiting the order to fire. Urethral grunted, and winced at the wound on his side, a large gash cutting across his stomach and down the length of his body, a gigantic tear. Theradir frowned and looked back to the dragon, which had turned to face them once more. It glared down at them, and opened its maw, roaring once more. Then, at that moment Theradir noticed something, where the arrows had stuck the dragon was bleeding heavily; its underside seemed less armoured than the rest of its body.
“The belly!” He yelled, “Aim for the belly of the beast” He looked round and saw nods of affirmation from the centaurs as they loosed their arrows once more towards the dragon. “Keep firing and do not stop!” He watched as the arrows slammed into the creature, and it reeled slightly, the pain of so many arrows thudding into it becoming more than it could handle or indeed ignore.
It roared and sent a jet of flame towards them, searing the ground as it impacted and sending them dashing away in all directions. Braggah looked back to where he had been only a second ago, and the small crater that stared ominously back at him. He winced and looked to the others, most of whom where groaning with pain. Urethral lay motionless on the ground, blood seeping from the wound in his side. He muttered under his breath and drew picked his sword from the ground, rousing the others to their feet. Theradir however, was still very much standing, two swords drawn…and charging at the dragon at full pelt. He felt a pang of worry, something un-natural for a centaur course through his veins.
Theradir knew he would have to end this quickly. They would never win a drawn out battle against such a foe and he alone knew what to do. He galloped as fast as he could forwards, dashing beneath the legs of the dragon as it floated down to the ground with a shattering crunch, and dug his blades into the dragons under belly. He felt the blades stick and tensed his muscles, feeling them tear as he tried to drag them through the tough skin. He lost his grip on one of the blades and let it stick fast, grabbing onto the one in his right hand and continued to pull. He stopped, avoiding the trashing feet of the dragon as they tried to stamp down on him, and he pulled the second sword, jumping into the cave ahead of him. He skidded and turned quickly, looking out at the damage he had done. The one sword was stuck fast, great blood trails in its underside. And yet, despite this it still turned and glared at him in the cave. Theradir knew this was not good, he turned and ran as fast as he could deeper into the caverns, hearing the dragon roar and slide in after him, rock splitting as it forced itself into the caves.
He knew he would get once chance at this. As the dragon rounded the corner of the tunnel and brought its beady eyes to bear on him, he flipped the sword in his grip and waited. He knew the beast would not breathe fire, it was too enclosed. Instead, it lunged at him; jaws open its great rows of teeth gleaming back at him, covered in saliva and ichors. At the exact moment where the jaws closed around him he slammed the sword deep into the roof of the dragon’s mouth, piercing the skin and slamming his blade hilt deep into the beast’s skull. He grimaced in pain as the dragons teeth sliced at his side, before letting go of the blade and staggering backwards, his rear legs slipping on the cold stone floor.
The dragon flailed, its body convulsing at the sudden shock of the blow. It slammed into the walls of the cave, sending rock falling from the ceiling, before after a moment it laid still, its gigantic form collapsing to the floor of the cave, its red eyes closing and blood dripping from its gigantic maw. Theradir stumbled over its hulking form; his body cut badly and staggered from the cave, dragging his back leg the gashes bleeding heavily and into the sunlight outside.
Braggah and the others walked towards him, fists on their chests in salute to his bravery. Harravesh walked to his side and looked to his wounds.
Theradir shrugged him away and looked to Braggah. “What of Urethral?” He looked for him in the remainder of the group.
Braggah hung his head. “He succumbed to his wounds that last lick of flame sent him flying to the ground brother” He looked back to the few centaurs lying dead and bleeding on the ground.
Harravesh spoke up. “We should tend to your wounds Theradir my lord” and glared at Braggah. “And then deal with these mutinous scum” He frowned.
Theradir glared at him. “We have paid enough for this” he looked at his brother “Let you bear the shame of this for all time brother, I would have thought you’d know better” He turned and with the help of Harravesh walked towards the path out of the canyon, casting a glance back at the dead dragon.
Braggah tried to answer, but he knew it was futile. It was true, he would have to bare the shame of losing so many for so little all his life now. He turned, and picked his brothers bow from the rocky floor and gazed at the dragon. At least, for the moment…it was all over.
Thanks to Orianna for the permission and inspiration for this short story
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He had been snowed into this small community for almost a week now, helping deal with a pack of ravaging Orcs that had killed a few of their best warriors. He had decided that it would be worth the gold to help them out, even if it was no challenge for him. It would pay his way back to the Southern plains in the spring and give him some gold to repair his armour if it got damaged. He looked down at his leather, and smoothed over the rough tear in the side. The Orcs blade had sliced clean through it, but gladly not pierced the skin. He smirked at the way he had smashed the foul creatures head into the rock face, it had been most pleasing to see. Behind him, the tavern door opened and a chill wind blasted the occupants. A few roared in discomfort and yelled for the newcomer to close the door. Vlahos turned and frowned; a pair of men in armoured uniforms of deep red slammed the door closed and shook the snow from their shoulders and hoods. They were guards from the town further down the pass, and they looked like they meant business. Vlahos turned back to the bar and the barmaid once more. This was none of his business, after all he’d be gone soon, and he didn’t need guards on his back as well as Orcs. He concentrated back on the flagon and decided to have one more, tipping it towards the young woman once more and nodding his thanks as she filled it once more. The guards behind him took seats along side him at the bar, they were surly looking fellows. One looked like he’d never seen a hot spring in his life, a matted beard and dirty face glaring from the coif around his head. The second was smaller, a young man it seemed. He looked fresh from the fields of battle, a look of determination on his face, which was scarred and seemed almost blasted red raw by the chill icy winds of the Dales. Vlahos nodded to them and turned back to his drink. He had a deep hatred of these authority types, abusing their power, but he would keep himself to himself. He did not turn as the larger of the two moved off towards the stairs following the barkeep up the stairs. He frowned, this was not something normal. The guard loosened his blade in its sheath. Vlahos’s hand automatically slid towards his broadsword and grasped the hilt. If anything did happen, he would be ready. A shout echoed from above, as if answering his question. He heard the draw of steel and the thud of something slamming into the oaken floor above him. Vlahos looked to the barmaid in front of him and saw the look of terror on her face. Quickly he drew his sword and with one swift motion brought the hilt of the heavy weapon into the face of the guard next to him. Taken by surprise the man had no time to draw his own weapon and with a satisfying crunch he heard the mans nose break as he toppled back onto the floor with a thud. Vlahos turned and grimaced the tavern was now full of running people, all trying to get out of the tavern before they got caught in the fight, but they were stopped as two more guards in red uniforms pushed their way inside through the wave of escapees, swords drawn. Vlahos sighed; this was not what he had in mind. From the staircase, the surly looking guard bathed in blood which slipped down his tunic thundered down and landed hard on the ground floor, looking at his fallen comrade, nose splintered into pieces and blood seeping from his mouth. Vlahos turned, he was surrounded. The two men at the door had moved around him, and this surly one had taken a position to his right. “This wasn’t your fight old man” The one said, moving forwards slowly. “All we wanted was the protection money.” Vlahos snarled. “I knew the guard were corrupt, but to the level of petty protection money, that is low.” He moved his broadsword inside his grip, clasping it with his two mighty hands. The guard in front of him yelled, and charged forwards bringing his sword through the air above him, Vlahos stepped to the side and let the blade of his enemy sink into the bar itself, sticking fast. With a roar, Vlahos slammed his sword into the back of the guard, hilt first, slamming the unsuspecting attack into the bar, head smacking against the wood before he slumped down to the floor. The second lunged at him, bringing a sword to his face. Vlahos brought his up quickly, blocking it with a clang of steel on steel, before bringing his fist towards the mans jaw, slamming it home and sending the guard flying backwards onto the floor. He winced at the pain in his fist and turned to face the surly looking guard that had jumped down the stair case. The man charged, sword low and arms wide, and tackled Vlahos sending them both flying across the room, smashing through chairs and tables before colliding with the wall on the other side. Vlahos lost the grip on his sword and saw it clatter to the wooden floor a few yards away and snarled in pain as he smashed into the wall with a thud. He brought his two fists down on the mans back, smacking him hard, but the guard just wouldn’t go down. He felt a fist slam into his stomach and winced, winded from the punch. Regaining his composure, he brought a knee high towards where the mans head should be and heard again that resounding crack as it connected. The man stumbled backwards and stood up straight clasping his nose, his sword still in his hand. Vlahos took the initiative and lifted a chair from the floor, throwing it hard at the guard; it smashed into him and sent the man to the floor. Vlahos rushed forwards, scooping his sword from the floor and flipping it into the air with one motion, twisting it in the air. With a war cry that shook the room he raised it high and thudded it down into the mans body. He felt it slam into the mans chest, puncturing the chain mail and searing skin, before cracking the wood beneath him. He twisted the blade and grimaced as the mans expression turned from one of pain to instant shock. He grunted and withdrew the blade, looking round the tavern, so much for a quiet night. He turned and walked to the bar; stepping on the guard he had left there, hearing a wince as he winded the man. He leant over and saw the barmaid quivering behind it, clutching a small dagger in her hands. Vlahos grabbed her arm and lifted her up onto her feet. “Take this”- he dipped into the large mass of furs and pulled out a few gold coins - “and tell Brusef to watch who he sends after me this time” He clasped her hand around the coins and turned, sliding his sword into its leather scabbard once more. Moving to the tavern door he grasped the wood and yanked it open, the cold chill of the wind biting at his bare skin. He grimaced; it was time to move on….he had nothing to stay for now. 1月29日 Last Stand...(short fiction)Last Stand… Halvahs stood atop the grassy mound and looked down at the combat whirling below him. He turned and signalled the archers behind him to fire, with a whisper of bows on the cold morning air, the arrows flew from their bows and sliced through the enemy below, skilfully placing the shots in between their own comrades and thudding into the skin of the Orc’s that battled in vain. Their flimsy wooden shields and leather armour was no match for the arrows of the elves. Halvah signalled the charge, and the archers slung their bows on their backs and drew long silver blades from the sheaths at their sides. As one, they leapt over the mound in one graceful leap and descended on the carnage below. Halvah, like many dark elves, was typically toned and muscular. His armour of bright gold glinted and rustled on him, the interlinked mithril chain as light as feathers. His hair too, was a deep black, almost mystically so, and seemed to flow like water across his shoulders. He was, however different in one way. All dark elves of this region were blessed with a deep, rich, purple skin that radiated honour and royalty to those around them. Halvah’s however had an ocean blue skin tone, like that of the seas around his homeland. He did not know why, but for some reason he seemed blessed with this un-natural (to him at least) skin. It, did not matter to him however, as with all things in dark elf society, you were praised for you skill with a bow or sword, and not on the way you looked, that…for many was a bonus, as the warlike nature of the dark elves meant that few looked handsome. Halvah’s descended on the combat and let his bright silver blades dance around him, slicing Orc flesh as he slipped between his comrades who too were taking down many of the enemy with graceful strikes. As Halvah slipped into his last strike he thudded the blades into the back of a wailing Orc and twisted hard, snapping the creatures spine, before letting it, limply slip to the ground in a heap. He looked around at his elves, his proud unit of deadly warriors and saw that none of them had fallen. The other unit, on the other hand was far worse for wear. Several of their Elvin kindred were laid dead, hacked apart so viciously by the blunt instruments of war these Orc’s called weapons. He bent down and closed the eyes of the nearest elf, whispering in his native tongue, a lament of passing for the brave warrior. He stood and brushed the black blood from his face before turning back to his unit. They would have to rest at some point today, but for the moment the battle raging further south demanded their attention, after all, he couldn’t let his brother have all the glory. After a minute of rest, he signalled for them to march on, leaving the bodies for the crows. It wasn’t a noble end for his kin, but they would understand his haste. The Orc’s had pressed further into their woodland realm than he had imagined, burning villages and killing on masse. He had never seen them so organised before, and so something within him smelt of a bigger, higher purpose surrounding this attack. A thin warrior, bow held in hand raced to his side from behind in the column. “Commander, the scouts tell of an entire Orc battalion ahead. Should we send for reinforcements from Ithillian?” He seemed nervous, but it didn’t show under his armoured helm. Halvahs pondered for a moment. “No, we will see this with our own eyes first, and then, if needs be send for reinforcements from Ithillian.” He put a hand on the elf’s shoulder and gripped tightly. “Prepare for battle warrior”. The elf walked slower for a second, before falling back into line with his comrades. It wouldn’t be long before the hit the river Andruin, and this battalion of Orcs. Halvahs had reservations about the size of this battalion, or its skill, especially for the likes of his unit. He knew reinforcements would be helpful, but the glory would be his today, never mind that of his brother. He would be too busy defending the city itself to be any help here, and needless to say he would claim the glory, as always. He pressed them on, making their way from the forests and down to the rivers edge. The bridge over the Andruin was a well guarded fortification, and this would indeed be where the brunt of the Orc attack would fall. But, what he saw…nearly made him drop to his knees in disbelief. The bridge was in ruins, bodies of elf and Orc lain across its stone built edges. Smoke billowed from the towers that guarded the bridge, flames licking from the tops like macabre candles. There was no-one, nothing around, all was deathly quiet save the call of the crows as they circled above. They were too late, the battalion had broken through. He turned to his unit, all of whom looked grim, and filled with anger at the sight before them. Halvahs composed himself and led them down to the bridge itself, along the blood stained river bank to the stone path that led onto it. As they crossed the looked down at the fellow kindred around them, all burnt and broken, elves as well as Orcs. It looked like something terrible had swept through this place with the force of an army twice this size. He had never seen the gate of Andruin fall before, but now all seemed much worse, if they could break this crossing, how were the others faring, the less well-guarded ones? He muttered in elvish to himself and continued across the bridge to the blasted gate, but as he did, he felt a low rumbling from all around him, something was physically shaking the very foundations of the bridge, it had to be something large, very large. As he turned to look back at his kin, a tap on his shoulder made him look back towards the blasted gate, Halvahs froze. From the other side of the gate, a creature almost half as tall as the towers around them slowly crashed towards them. It was darkest grey, looking almost like a dragon, and yet with no wings or scaly skin. It seemed more mystical than that, as if pieced together from the very ether around it. It stalked forwards, head low…eying the Elves on the bridge. Halvahs did nothing, before slowly drawing his blades from their sheaths and gripping them tight. The elves behind him notched their arrows and pulled back on the strings, the creak of ancient wood sounded as they held the shot, awaiting his order. The creature saw them, as if noticing for the first time and roared, it was like nothing Halvahs had heard before, deep and guttural, like a horn of the Northman and yet laced with what was unmistakably a hiss of some kind. It bounded towards them, smashing through the gate towards the long narrow bridge. Halvahs grimaced and shouted back to his unit “FIRE!!!” He yelled, arrows shot past his face and towards the shadowy creature. They thudded home, but seemed to disappear into the darkness of the beast, absorbed into its very being; it did not halt, and came straight for them. It was too late too avoid it now; they leapt at the beast swords drawn and danced around it as it slid towards them across the stone. Halvahs and his elves slipped to the side, barely escaping the charge. However, as they balanced on the edges of the bridge one of their kin was caught by the creature, its gigantic mouth ripping at him, and flinging him from the bridge like a rag doll. They looked on in anguish as his body dropped into the murky waters of the Andruin with a splash and concentrated back on the beast. Halvahs ordered his kin to attack, they leapt at the beast slicing at it with their blades, and seeing the blades cut the creature, but seeming to do very little to the beast itself. They dodged its flailing arms and gnashing jaws, but as they did it would slowly take them down, smashing their bodies into the bridge, or sending them flying into the air. Halvahs dodged through the bodies and the limbs and ducked under the creature’s arms, He looked back as he saw his kin get ripped to pieces by the beasts, screams of pain filling the air. He jumped and landed on the creatures arm, and as it lifted let himself fly upwards for a second before dropping onto its back. He took a second to shake the shock from his limbs and felt the skin of the beast beneath him. It was a grey, and surrounded by what felt like water, except it was black, and solely around the body of this beast. He didn’t know what to do. He looked back up as he saw another of his kin fly through the air and smash into the stone of the tower nearby, breaking uncomfortably. Halvahs resolved himself, and twisted his blades in his hands, pointing them down and yelling plunged them down into the back of the beasts’ neck. The blades drove home, and he heard the screech of metal as it seared through the skin of the beast, it flailed and tried to bat him from its back, only now noticing the pain of the annoying elf on its back. He caught a sharp blow across his left and was sent flying from its back landing heavily on the stone bridge, his head smacking into the floor and sending a dull haze through his vision. He looked up, through blurred vision to see the beasts swing around madly, smashing into the towers on either side before rocking back and toppling into the waters beneath them. It splashed into it hard, sending a torrent of water high into the air, falling like an un-natural rain on the bridge, soaking Halvahs wet through. He grimaced and covered his face, before brushing his hair from his eyes. It was quiet once more, nothing stirred. Halvahs looked down at the bridge once more, none of his kin had made it, and the few that were here on the bridge were crumpled, their armour, their strength, nothing against that beast. He wondered, what could have brought such a thing to these shores, it was nothing he had seen or read about before in his life. He groaned and pushed himself to his feet, he realised his blades were now deep beneath the waters now, family heirlooms lost, for the cost of twenty five elvish warriors. It didn’t seem right. He turned just as something caught his eye. Halvahs stopped and looked back; a unit of Orcs was making its way towards the bridge, led by a towering Ogre. They noticed him and with barked orders lumbered towards him. Halvahs smirked, and picked a pair of elvish weapons from the ground, twirling them in his hands and facing the oncoming horde of creatures. He blew hard and the hair in front of his face moved out of his vision. Slipping into his fighting stance he narrowed his eyes and tensed his muscles.
“Bring it...” Another day...another blogYay...Monday once more. If you could hear me say that you'd feel the sarcasm lacing my voice at this very moment. Well, what can I say...its pretty typical on this day, the start of a new week...and obviously more and more work. Thankfully, I didnt have to get up too early this morning, but it was still a pain, especially considering the annoyance of having to eventually fall asleep last night. On the bright side, I sat down in bed and worked on a story that I've been deciding upon for a long time. The spy/thriller genre is intense to say the least, and its given me much grief this weekend.
Also...with that in mind I think I'm going to back to fantasy writing after I've finished this short story. It seems a shame to leave it, but this just isnt what I enjoy. The main thing is, that with fantasy I can use my own imagination and let everything flow easily, plus I'm not confined to the boundaries of reality, and for the most part I can do what I want, when I want...just gotta have that dedication to sit down and write...for a long, long time. One thing that does strike me with this is dedication. The amount of background involved in creating a world is immense and for what its worth I bow down to the authors and writers that sit down and plan every last detail of a make-believe world. Its hard...and they deserve a lot of credit.
The thing that seems to strike me everytime I write now, especially considering fantasy is the same view I have in my mind...everytime. If anyone has played anything based on Baulders Gate etc/Icewind Dale you will know the character of Drizzt. Well, I have a certain image in my mind...drawn from one of his books...of a dark elf, like him...bow slung over his back and wrapped in tight furs...trudging through the snow...two long blades sheathed at his side...struggling against the icy wind. Then, as he struggling, he hears a growl on the air and turns to face a large, black shagggy wolf...stalking towards him...the ensuing fight is hard to sum up, but to make it interesting, the snow...and constrast of bright crimson on white is startling to imagine.
A game that need full credit for a lot of things is Kingdom Under Fire. The battles in that are something you should certainly experience as a writer of fantasy...it will be your main source of how to make brutal/hard hitting battles seem realistic in your writing. Another source that is invaluable is that of LotR's. Obviously those battles are something to look at in greta detail, especially if your going for that powerful, emotional side to a battle rather than the gritty side.
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On a completely differetn subject...I'm fed up....I really am seriously pissed off...almost exclusivly at this very moment. At this veyr moment I could very gladly punch someone in the face...very hard...and not feel bad about it. I think, in good old normal gaming fashion, I shall take my aggresion/pain/feelings out on a game of some sorts...Its always good to cut up a few villagers and fry them with lightning...that works...always.
On a serious note..I'm just going to write a bunch of swear words now...
FUCk...SHIT...BOLLOCKS....CRAP...TWAT...DICK FACED MOTHER FUCKER....IDIOTIC WANK TWAT....PISS FACED SHIT TWATTER....ahh..much better...and for those of a nervous dispossition...just forget that bit and read the lovely writing stuff I said earlier.
Annoyed....
N...Nin....Oh I cant be bothered... 1月28日 Three wishes...A recent thread on Fable-2.com got me thinking. If we had three wishes to ask for whatever we wanted, what would we ask for? Now, this struck me as a very important question...as thinking about it you're immediatly handed endless possibilities as to what you could do. The obvious one is to ask for wealth of unimaginable amounts and then live out your dreams like that and keep the other two for later...
BUT...what if there was something else, a lot deeper than that which could be gleamed from this. I mean if you think about it there are literally thousands of questions that no-one knows the answer too. The most ultimate question of all would obviously be "Why are we here?" And Im sure he Genie would be stumped by that one, after all...thats something that no-one could probably comprehend or understand.
Then, theres the little things that make you wonder. Why does the wind blow? What is Gravity? Why are humans the most intellegent species on the planet? What makes us so unique? Why is THIS the right spot in the galaxy for our Earth and what was the chances of it happening? Things along those lines are obviously soemthing to think about...
It made me think, would you be realistic about your wishes? Would you wish for things that you'd always wanted...or things that were impossible?
But...as I said, makes you think...dont it.
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Another thing happened over the weekend, the re-claiming of Moby as one of my favorite artists. Not only has he got some good songs, but for the purposes of enjoying a relaxing afternoon, Moby wins hands down...no other music relaxes a hard Ninja days work. This, and some good gaming coming back to me. I've picked up Kingdom Under Fire: Heroes and Dynasty Warriors 5 once more...and intend to play them to the maximum. Also...had an amazing scene in my head of how good a KufH movie would be...the rain storms, the bloody battles, the massive special effects...Phantagram, get your ass in gear...
All thats left is to enjoy Top Gear (returning with the Hampster!!)...so enjoy your Sundays people...
I leave home for a few days....No fewer that 21...yes...21 reported posts in my flipping inbox today. I thought "Oh, no need to worry...I can enjoy my Saturday" but looks like things can still go wrong.
But hey...I'll deal with that later when I can get onto the forums.
After all, I've enjoyed my day of freedom...got back with the guys and worked out that geeky obsession once more. I must say Munchkins is possibly one of the funniest thing you will ever do as a Geek...especially if your back-stabby, and ruthless enough to shit on everyone else whos playing. It really is that loose and fun to play...brilliant.
Also, started on Mordhiem campaign...and yet again my Champion fails to pull the magic out of the hat, going down to a measly Clansman...I mean where were the Karma Gods when I needed them....crap I tell's ya!
Anyway...not that anyone cares, but I'm gonna shell out on a few good movies tomorrow if I can.
- V for Vendetta
- Bourne movie series (Identity/Supremacy)...
So...wish me luck. 1月26日 Why would I need a title?Well, all is going incredibly well. I've come to the conclusion that Live Spaces is the 'Thinking Mans' Myspace. Sounds strange, but it seems a lot more sedate and well, less messy than the blogging tool mentioned hence. So, I'll be using it a lot more...even if you dont read it, lol.
My search continues for a few games...looking on Ebay has never been something I enjoy doing, and I much prefer to see what I've brought and check it out before I spend my hard earned cash (except I dont have a job...but ignore that for the sake of my ramblings). At the moment my games on the outlook are God of War, suggested to me by someone...I really would like to get this, and from whats been said of it, its one of those games you HAVE to play. I've enjoyed the Youtube videos of the game, but it always leaves me feeling guilty that I havent found it yet.
The second game, is Legend of Dragoon (see a Sony pattern forming here?). Been looking for it, every since I re-brought a Playstation last year with Final Fantasy. I have to say my memories of that game are still as clear as they ever were, I remember sitting down and playing that with my brother for hours and hours. We even found the good old 'Turbo' button on the controllers so we could watch the spells at maximum effect, something that would never happen unless you had fingers so finely tuned they could tap at 100 presses a second. Thank God for that little button...
So far the search isnt going well, since both these games have seemed to vanish into the ether of British gaming store...and no-one wants to stock it it seems. I could understand Legend of Dragoon considering its age...but a hit like God of War?? Seems like a conspiracy to me.
So...if anyone reading this, in the UK feels like donating to me one or the other of these games, I can see a charitable donation coming your way.
On another topic, Fable-2 is now entering its next stage of life. The site is under going maintenece and will be revived with an all new Vbulletin system for the forums in the near future. So, if your wondering...theres your answer. I feel a certain dedication to the site of late, and think that this could be a good step forwards in the development of our community, our sensible...proper community.
Also, signing up to projectego.net has given me more bredth of knowledge concerning Fable. Its good to look into the wider community and enjoy what others are saying. As they say, its a Global Village nowadays and its good to know people all over the world.
Also, my writing will be slowly taking a back seat for a while. I feel like Im forcing myself to write more and more now, and that isnt how I like to do things. So, sorry to dissapoint those people that read ToD and Fable:Hero but for the time being, thats on hold while I work on other more important things in my life. As well as that, I'd like to say a thankyou to people for sending me reading material to pour over these last few days. Its a joy to read into other peoples universes and creations and especially exciting to see characters develop.
My aim for now is to finish these fanfics off to a fair level...when I get back in the writing mood and then move onto something more original. After recently watching Bourne Identity/Supremacy I've had an need to write along those lines, enjoying some spy/thriller shorts if I can. This, as well as the involvement in Project Ibun II is something that has always fascinated me...and I imagine theres a lot of reading around the subject.
But...again thats something I've been doing for a while. After all watching shows like Spooks (BBC1) and movies like Leon etc...and games like Hitman has given me an insight into the world of espionage and undercover workings. Its all very interesting and I'll keep those of you with some interest in the know as to how it develops.
Overall, it seems as if this has been a good start to what promises to be an amazing year for me. Its all really turned around since October last year and it seems as if its all going to be getting better by the day. And, for all of you still not sure if this year will turn out good, do what you enjoy and make the most of it.
Well, after what seems like an extraordinarily long blog today I can only say have a good weekend. Also...before I go, a mention to how cool this weekend is going to be. Mordhiem/Pizza/Poker/Munchkins! and a whole lot of other geek-fest things will make it something to remember, also Homecooked meals area a bonus.
Signing off...
Ninja...err...Ben.
(Sorry, force of habit) 1月25日 Unexpected twists...In a strange...strange way of looking at things, I have begun to play my Xbox (original) more and more. I'm beginning to think the Next-Gen isnt all it was cracked up to be. I mean, sure when I play Oblivion it looks pretty...but if I turn it off to play on Fable or Halo:CE...am I missing something?
I have to say, my selection of games is limited at the moment...
- Gears of War
- Oblivion
- Dead Rising
- NHL 2K7
- Marvel Ultimate Alliance
- Dead or Alive 4
And however much I play these games...they just aint as fun as my Xbox ones. I mean, I've sat down and played Hitman: Blood Money and Fable for ages today, and never had so much fun. Added to that a sudden craving for any kind of Dynasty Warriors/Samurai Warrios game and I think I'm slowly slipping back into the Old Gen??
I think I have found the solution however, Xbox Live. The lack of connection too it for me means that offline gaming has had to become the forefront of my experiences, and this is something I do enjoy more now. Dont get me wrong, I'd love a session of Halo 2 online with a few mates in Slayer or Zombies...and I think thats what would pull me back into the Next-Gen. For the short time I played Gears of War online I was amazed, that would be why I would stick with the game, but alas the 48 hours ended too soon.
My perogative now has become to enjoy single player...offline gaming to its full. Also, nothing like Split-screen to while away a few hours....especially with some cool party games.
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On a completely somewhat un-related topic...Fable-2.com. Is it me, or does off-topic seem to have become a mission for a lot of members? Even with a warning it doesnt take long for them to stray once more. Still, there is still polite and frank discussion...and everyone enjoys it, so who am I to complain?
But anyway...what with the new changes for Fable-2.com and the things to look forwards too this year, and beyond...Its all looking pretty snazzy on the horizon.
Enjoy your day...and watch for Ninja's. 1月18日 I'm Back...A long time away....lol.....
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